http://aubreyrose.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aubreyrose.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sweetprince 2010-03-16 10:44 pm (UTC)

This was gorgeous. You have an amazing way with words, the description of Nate's curse is short but feels so fleshed out. I love how Nate seems so adjusted despite having to live a crazy double life. And Brad's obsession with the mystery girl but fascination with Nate is just perfect.

Brad slides his hand forward on the table until the tips of his fingers touch Nate’s. “What if…maybe I want to try?”

So lovely!

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