This was incredible and insane. The AU plot is so utterly original and credibly pulled off that I really just kind of don't know what to even say about it! Their backstories are well thought out, and they seem to work not only in giving some meat to the story, but also more oomph in their characters. Does that make any sense at all? I just mean that it plays a part in how they act, react, etc. among one another.

Ray is hilarious here, Walt was cute, Brad and Nate were too hot for words, and I actually could see all of them as models. And you place them exactly where they should be/would probably be, I'm sure, in real life! I'd love to see the photoshoots!!! Also seems like you really know your stuff, or did your research, both of which are worthy of mad props!! And Brad and Nate are just so incredibly cute together, fit so well here, that I just melted! Wonderful, wonderful job!! More please?!