So I've read this fic three different times, just trying to figure out how to give you feed back on it because I adore it so much. I love all the little details you've wiggled in there, how you've really created this world that I really feel like the characters can live in. The Love, Actually reference and conversation made me positively giggle, and your Ray in this was wonderful.
But what's truly wonderful about this fic is your Brad, and the narrative voice you use. It just feels so... quintessentially him, if that makes any sense. As in, I can totally see how this Brad relates to canon!Brad, and he's sounds exactly right, pitch perfect in my head, and it all just *fits* wonderfully.
And Nate. Nate. &hearts He's perfect too.
And now I'm done gushing, I swear, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this.
Peeee. Esssssss. I lied, I'm totally not done gushing yet The sex? Hot like burning. \o/
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But what's truly wonderful about this fic is your Brad, and the narrative voice you use. It just feels so... quintessentially him, if that makes any sense. As in, I can totally see how this Brad relates to canon!Brad, and he's sounds exactly right, pitch perfect in my head, and it all just *fits* wonderfully.
And Nate. Nate. &hearts He's perfect too.
And now I'm done gushing, I swear, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this.
Peeee. Esssssss. I lied, I'm totally not done gushing yet The sex? Hot like burning. \o/