I'd love to be coherent, but I'm not sure I can manage it.
There is a brutality? No, that's not the word. A power, as in puissance, as in will-stripping power, in this love between them. Neither of them is really in control, and both are, and you elucidate that delicate, infinitely explosive balance so well that it's not noticeable in specific details but only in the atmosphere of the work as a whole.
I'm not sure I'm making sense here.
The final line, btw, is brilliant, and does so much to bring together the themes of disassociation and integration and the lines that we will and won't cross, both real and figurative.
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I'd love to be coherent, but I'm not sure I can manage it.
There is a brutality? No, that's not the word. A power, as in puissance, as in will-stripping power, in this love between them. Neither of them is really in control, and both are, and you elucidate that delicate, infinitely explosive balance so well that it's not noticeable in specific details but only in the atmosphere of the work as a whole.
I'm not sure I'm making sense here.
The final line, btw, is brilliant, and does so much to bring together the themes of disassociation and integration and the lines that we will and won't cross, both real and figurative.
Brilliant. Just brilliant! Bravo!