Holy hell, your dialogue is HOT! I love the power struggle between them that isn't really a struggle at all, more like a shove-give-shove-back-takeplease and then a blending that created enough sparks that I'm pretty sure I could see them in my kitchen. GAH. Thanks for sharing, Lynsey
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Date: 2008-05-05 03:47 pm (UTC)Thanks for sharing,
Lynsey