I was looking at Sam's back and admiring how well you did the shading on it, cos it really does remind me of Sams back but then ...and don't take this the wrong way...creepy baby popped out. And my first thought was Damien (cue Omen music). No lie. And I hadn't fully read your comments until I'd scrolled down and laughed hard. I personally think the babys quite cool actually, evil babies always warm my heart. And mad drawing skillz with the background landscape dude. The hills and the bushy trees yo.
On a serious note tho, I do like the cropping and positioning of everything, everything is offset well. The details are sparse but they say a lot. I like the way we cant see Sam's face but the babys looking at the viewer, the power of his shoulders contrasting well with the gentle way he's holding Damien, the bottle (&hearts) as a forgotten thing in his pocket. Its kinda like intruding on this little private moment.
Concrit if thats cool? I think the background needs a little work. Less detail in the background is a good idea for this piece but it needs to be softened a bit more to put the focus on Sam and the baby :)
AND WHO ARE RYAN AND JAKE? Srsly... Ryan can fuck me silly anytime. And Jake can watch.
I don't know the background to these characters, but it can easily be picked up that their antagonistic towards each other... and as a basis for hot porn, yes omg yes. I love boys who are destructive and can't express themselves so it really worked for me. The ending was great, the idea of the doll house especially and what Jake means and does to Ryan - I especially liked that thread around Ryans control running through the stories. I would read more even if I didn't know what was going :).
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On a serious note tho, I do like the cropping and positioning of everything, everything is offset well. The details are sparse but they say a lot. I like the way we cant see Sam's face but the babys looking at the viewer, the power of his shoulders contrasting well with the gentle way he's holding Damien, the bottle (&hearts) as a forgotten thing in his pocket. Its kinda like intruding on this little private moment.
Concrit if thats cool? I think the background needs a little work. Less detail in the background is a good idea for this piece but it needs to be softened a bit more to put the focus on Sam and the baby :)
AND WHO ARE RYAN AND JAKE? Srsly... Ryan can fuck me silly anytime.
And Jake can watch.
I don't know the background to these characters, but it can easily be picked up that their antagonistic towards each other... and as a basis for hot porn, yes omg yes. I love boys who are destructive and can't express themselves so it really worked for me. The ending was great, the idea of the doll house especially and what Jake means and does to Ryan - I especially liked that thread around Ryans control running through the stories. I would read more even if I didn't know what was going :).
wow this is longer than I thought it would be